uk what i think? i think u should start a metal band. ill be bass in it. u be song writer/vocalist/screamy person. wonderful. its all set. now all we need is a couple guitar peeps. ill get mi buddy gabriel to be drummer!

very nice poem!! thanks for reviewing my work. u made it sound really good! i didnt think it was that great..

BUT I LOVE THIS POEM!! i have my own magical reverse nightmares too. =]

made me dizy. i loved the last line and the line where u described the condition of the merry go round. write more please.

i like this, the way it was written makes it all feel so happy & free, like from the point of view of a child. pretty & cute.

wow

I loved the metaphors on this-especially the main one with the merry go round thats really original and great. The rhyming scheme is great and it flows really nicely.

great poem

benji