THIS IS JUST TOO CUTE!

what a nice story! it is really interesting and cute :)

Okay, a lot of your characters are cute, I admit it. Especially scarred, denying griffins.

So cute ! ^_^

“Ever stop to think, Feo, that maybe the treasure you were guarding was you?”

*melts with Feo*

Hei~

I'm poking around again, hehe. I really like this plot. It kept me guessing, cos i didn't realise they were all related. One thing though, if Feo was guarding Elric's wife, the princess, and Nix isn't Elric's birth brother, which i assume he isn't because he mentioned growing up as the king's bratty son, then why would he have met Feo before while questing, because at that time Feo was guarding his sister. Unless... oh. He wasn't guarding his sister at the time. Oh... Haha... Nice story :P

Aw! Poor battered men! That was funny and beautiful. Loved the summoning into the pool and the jealousy. And their pain that was clearer for you not detailing it, just letting it show in their thoughts and interactions.

Every time I read this, I melt, just like Feo.

Wow, this is an awesome and well written story!

So cute! It was short but very well done. We understand everything easily and it's wonderfuly written. In short, I liked it a lot.

aw, you always do the sweetest endings (frustratingly pg though they may be..)and it leaves me wanting to know what happens after the "they lived happily ever after" bit, but I have a vivid imagination luckely XD

hehe, i like the part ending with " the treasure you were guarding was you". very cute story =)

YAY! I liked this. A lot. Especially the griffin idea. Don't suppose you could write another story about a different mystical creature...?

But yes, I thought it was very cute and clever.

Oh, I loved this! The history of Feo's involvement with the family was great. So much more than just boy meets boy and whatnot. Now Nix just needs to go on a short quest for a magical creature healing potion so Feo can be whole again. But, I suppose, getting to keep Nix around is maybe a better reward than restored health and tail. But if he could have both...Wow, this is ramble-y. Sorry 'bout that. I'm adding this to my favorites so I can read it over and over.

subliminalinspirationforboywithhorns:p

The End? *Pouts* But it was such an awesome story!

i think i squealed. but shh...you can't tell anyone!!

this was too cute! i was wondering when the connection would be made between the beginning and the ending. i had a feeling, but it wasn't until a bit later that i went, "oho, what's this??" *laughs*

i loved this...*sighs* a good read, really lovely.