|Reviews for To the one who might just be the one|
| XaviaerCage 8/25/06 . chapter 1
"like a pulsing screaming aching heart
the pain of endings before they start"
| Faithless Juliet 1/12/06 . chapter 1
Fascinating presentation - the rhyming was a bit disjointed but otherwise it was a very interesting idea. Keep up the good work.
| notso darling 1/11/06 . chapter 1
i like how you made everything scream alive. there is something very rare about this poem.