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| jaybriel 2008-04-09 ch 1,  | abuseThis actually really scared me. Heh, I read the first chapter just before I went to bed and was almost to scared to go into the bathroom and look at the mirror...gotta love hyperactive imaginations! I'm really intrigued to see how this will turn out. |
| Hate In The Form Of Passion 2006-02-22 ch 2, | abuseDamn. I want Afton and Kitten to ** so badly. I hate sexual tension! HATE IT! |
| BrideofMirkwood 2006-02-04 ch 2, | abuseInteresting... Update Soon! |
| fizgiggle 2006-02-04 ch 2, | abuseExcellent! I'm really intrigued...please update soon! |
| kitty 2006-02-03 ch 2, anon. | abuse** fabulous, as always. dante would be a bouncer for some high class club. and afton should molest kit in his sleep. theyd both love it. |
| BlackPanther02 2006-02-03 ch 2, | abuseahh. soo god. i'm in love with this story. MORE PLEASEE.~panther |
| flights.of.fantasy 2006-02-03 ch 2, | abuseyou updated yay!i love the characters..afton sounds super interesting.. hmm the monster will be here soon rite.. great chappie xD |
| Michelle 2006-02-02 ch 2, anon. | abuseThis is quite good. A bit confusing but still good. Hope you continue it. |
| ddz008 2006-02-02 ch 2, | abuseGREAT CHAPTER!I love this story SO much!It's really interesting, even if it just has two chapters.Hope to see the next chapter pretty soon, please!:D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D |
| BlackPanther02 2006-01-19 ch 1, | abusesounds pretty much amazing. you've got me hooked already.~panther |
| SummerBreeze83 2006-01-15 ch 1, | abuseOh me oh my! You definataly have the talent for a thriller writer! Cut the chapter off at just the perfect place, give just enough detail...well done, and update soon!! |
| Reignbowed 2006-01-14 ch 1, | abuseOh, wow. This is, like, one of the best stories I've read. You so better write the second chapter soon. x) |
| ddz008 2006-01-14 ch 1, | abuseIt was such a GREAT chapter!!Really, really interesting! |
| flights.of.fantasy 2006-01-13 ch 1, | abusewoah, nice ending. hmm, would lyk to see more. (: if Soren survived.. what happened to the others? guess we'll find out. haha update soon. |
| Hate In The Form Of Passion 2006-01-13 ch 1, | abuseOH WOW! This is really interesting so far and I like how you simply described the characters. It was a little hard to understand but I got the picture a little in the middle or something. I lovee it! UPDATE SOON! |