Damn you for sticking the song in my head^_^ Well, that being said, the poem's asskickingly good. It could accompany the song very nicely. Write a Ramble On poem ! ~your pal Chyme

Snowden would be proud... and would probably make you analyse it, and we all know how you love analysing poetry. :P

On an unrelated note, I will need your services for beta-reading again soon. Just to let you know.

Ja matane!

Wow, great job! I love it! Awesome.

~dragonzz~

That was awesome

oh... WOW... i like this... just reading it gives me a sense of something forbidden... possibily dangerous... well worded.

Very good, my man. Hehe. I liked the imagery, very Pink Floydish. It's out there, I enjoyed it quite a bit. And nice to see where you get your inspiration from too. Please read and review my work, I'd appreciate it very much!