Reviews for My First and Last Kiss

Ivy Ether 2006-03-10 ch 1,	abuseHi and thank you for the dedication! Oh, that’s very bittersweet, but I must say, a long time to wait for a kiss. A love that’s quite deep, even as children. Ah, if only all love were like that! Lovely as always!
A Beautiful Nightmare 2006-02-04 ch 1,	abuseHello. So... your half chinese and half spanish? Awesome! I'm full Chinese but half fluent in Spanish... oh yeah... I have a bunch of filipino friends too cuz I live on Guam... uh... don't know if you heard of it... but yeah... small rock in the Pacific ocean... therefore... if I say... este es bien, pero tienes poco error... (or) 這是好的但是你有一些錯誤 ... haha... well either way... it means this was good but you had some errors... try editing it... for example: "A kiss goodbyes have knot"... kinda confused here... if you say "a" how can the "goodbye" be plural?
Anarkali 2006-01-18 ch 1,	abuseGer$h0M...O_O...kakagulat ka tlga...hahaha pero anyways, nice poem :D keep it up ! don't stop writing, whatever you do, coz its one of God's gifts to you :P (sana wag lng lalaki un ulo mo kpg pinupuri ka...:P jk jk) and get it published someday...i'll be waiting for it in the bookstores...