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| haruku 2008-10-02 ch 1, anon. | abuse"I want you, you lie." Love this line. Simple and effective. |
| just a teardrop 2006-01-14 ch 1, | abusewow this is amazing! i love your writing style. beautiful imagery. so many great lines... |
| Res Ipsa 2006-01-12 ch 1, | abuse"I’m Sunday-morning sick and a statistic" this can mean so many things...and I think we have all felt this way at least once. I love it...very powerful. |
| dollface and her cancer 2006-01-12 ch 1, | abuseThe Friday night/ Sunday morning contrast drives the piece brilliantly. I love, "I want you, you lie", and there are so many other lines I could quote. The entire piece is powerful, but the ending is nearly heartbreaking. I love it. |