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Reviews For: Sunday Morning Sick

haruku
2008-10-02
ch 1, anon.
abuse"I want you, you lie."

Love this line. Simple and effective.
just a teardrop
2006-01-14
ch 1,
abusewow this is amazing! i love your writing style. beautiful imagery. so many great lines...
Res Ipsa
2006-01-12
ch 1,
abuse"I’m Sunday-morning sick and a statistic" this can mean so many things...and I think we have all felt this way at least once. I love it...very powerful.
dollface and her cancer
2006-01-12
ch 1,
abuseThe Friday night/ Sunday morning contrast drives the piece brilliantly. I love, "I want you, you lie", and there are so many other lines I could quote. The entire piece is powerful, but the ending is nearly heartbreaking. I love it.
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