"I want you, you lie."

Love this line. Simple and effective.

wow this is amazing! i love your writing style. beautiful imagery. so many great lines...

"I’m Sunday-morning sick and a statistic" this can mean so many things...and I think we have all felt this way at least once. I love it...very powerful.

The Friday night/ Sunday morning contrast drives the piece brilliantly. I love, "I want you, you lie", and there are so many other lines I could quote. The entire piece is powerful, but the ending is nearly heartbreaking. I love it.