That was made me laugh a lot...

and I loved it :)

i love this.
the beginning of it is some what filled with loathe and despise, while at the same time desperate and clingy.

then at the end, the last line, is sort of comedic. changing the tone to a somewhat light one.

I like this a lot, it's really creative.

woow. this is good

LOLOLOOLOLOLOLOOLLOLLOOLLOLLOL. omg so funny. hahahhahahahah. i love you man. *hugs**hands you some other random snack thats edible* remember to exercise kay! i know it reads like ** but i LIVE to give you this feeling. LOL. nah. but the phrase is just very funny. very very funny. dont die okay!

I luv the ending it was very ironic, it kinda reminds of those weird riddle games my teacher makes us play in English, there was one about how a lady shot a prized turkey and no one did anything...but I think u know how she shot the turkey (though my dumb self had to be told why no one did anything)

...ne way sorry for gettin off subject it was really good poem...love the use of irony

I think this would be an interesting story.

I love your poetry and short stories by the way. Awesomely-goodness.

I love your pennames btw. So fun.

Teehee very good i love it! ^_~ last line made me giggle

such a fascinating and well-handled format.

the ending is orgasmic(ly) lovely. iLOVEitsomuch.

~* noelle

i love this and i'm adding it to my favs!

I only liked the last line.

ooh, i really like this. especially the ending line 'cause it made me laugh. i love the first stanza and the line "& instead of developing pictures we develped a new way to communicate without words but with our bodies." the third stanza seems a little out-of-place, and i wasn't really sure how it connected with the rest of the poem.

Written very well. The format of the poem really gives it flavor.

Not exactly sweet, but not entirely bitter either. Bittersweet.

Nice, very nice.

love the ending; it reverses absolutely everything. love how you lead up before that- it's so bitter until the final parenthesis...