oh wow! i REALLY love the last stanza, but the whole poem is just fantastic! you are a wonderful poet!

This is absolutley beautiful! I can almost hear you reading it :) Great job!

That made me think I have to say. Good job though :) I love this and all of your poems. Thanks for reviewing. glad you cared to read :)

Beautiful words used. Just a beautiful

wow! that was an amazing poem. You are a gifted poet. Your line breaks were in the perfect places, and I like how you broke up the verses as well. My favorite line was: "Thoughts come and go like waves." It's such a good similie! Nice job.

-xalter_egox-

P.S. Thanks for the review!

Hm, I wish rain could wash away all my sorrows and pains, but I guess I have a few too many of them, lol! But then again, in a way it does. I totally love rain and come from a place where it rains a lot, so this has special meaning for me. I really like it. Have I mentioned I love how you write? Hehe.

Keep writing,

Rhia

Hi. Thanks for reviewing my poem, thought I should return the favor. I read a couple of your poems and I really like this one. It flows nice, and it just sounds soft. Like a pastel painting. Beauty that can't be captured with harsh red strokes.

Beautiful... very well written.

beautiful. I think my fave. line was the "thoughts come and go like waves." wonderful piece! Keep it up!

Somehow, this poem's serenity overrided the absolutely obnoxious whirring sound that my wonderfully up-to-date computer is making. I liked it a lot. Keep writing.

-LPC

thanx for the review, btw,...this is realy good, you have a strong talent in writing poetry and this is a beautful peice.

This is beautiful!

I've always been partial to comparing feelings/emotions with nature, so I adore that aspect of this poem. You have a very easy, simple, natural flow to your words and the rhythyms. Also, you make it so incredibly easy for the reader to picture the scene in their mind.

Wonderful poem!

I really love those last two lines.. awesomely done

Wonerfully written, the imagery and description was wonderful. Unique and beautiful, it's awesome! Great job, keep it up! Btw, thanks a bunch for reviewing "Vacant on Valentine's". I'm glad you enjoyed it.

I reall liked this the imagery is really beautiful. Your use of alliteration is very effective. Fab1