This is bloody brilliant. The only inconsistency I see in it is the amount of backlash referred to as the Second Revolution- I daresay there wouldhave been many, many more problems than the one incident that changed Laram to hayden, that would have been seen by Zorana much earlier, and in more frequency, I'd imagine...
Nonetheless, this is an extremely enthralling read.
Nicely done.
Erisah

very nice

Finished?? Oh well, now I think about it it all makes sense. Great story, well done, though the end did seem to go a little fast.

it's done?! NO! good job though!! but no!

Apart from the fact it was such a great story.. It changed to quickly for me, the ending.. my mistake and i had to reread a couple chapters cos it had been a while but I still loved it! Great work!

hehe. cute ending. but I think I expected more but, I didn't write it. Probably your plan all along. It was a very good story. ^_^

This is my favourite chapter yet, though it is kind of confusing. It's great that although she couldn't defeat Akhmatova, she's still managing to fight. I assume there's going to be more, so I'd like to hear more about the Revolution and how it came into place.

BRAVO BRAVO!! this is amazing!! I really have enjoyed all the chapters!! I liked the whole story line...very unique and it is so intriguing!! LOL! Alexa xox p.s. I luved all de characters especially Laram an Zorana...where did u come up with those names they rox!!

very good story! I can't wait for more! update soon please~

Great Chapter. More please.

Got a little confused at what was happening. But my guess is she got out, then finally started to kill the evil people. >:3 Wish I had her powers.

Can't wait for the next chapter!

*sigh* dang.

She won, but now... so young and she has blood on her hands.

:) CD

I cannot surpress my insane laughter, knowing that soon some horrible man is about to die!

woot!

I cannot wait for the rest of your tail!

HA! SWEETNESS! *grins*

:) CD

YAY! she's discovered her powers!! woot!