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| simpleplan13 2006-02-26 ch 1,  | abusesad and beautiful.. i liked how you bolded the letters... very sweet... my grandmother was also cremated so i can relate.. awesome job |
| SkEpTiCaL.OnE.511 2006-02-22 ch 1, | abuseit's amazing. i like how you spelled out Grandma like that. |
| al-Salil 2006-02-21 ch 1, | abusewow-deep and meaningful.people write about death, authors are able to pullm it off-ur the latter my friend |
| Pink Sparrow 2006-02-08 ch 1, | abuseoh wow, this is so beautiful. I like how the letters in bold spell a word. the whole thing is really sad, but beautiful. nice work. |
| Princess-anna57 2006-01-28 ch 1, | abuseHi Josh! Wow, this is very, very touching. And very powerful too. I like how you bolded the letters to spell "Grandma", very creative. I particularly adore the last stanza, excellent poem. Well done! *applaudes*. Keep it up! ~Anna~ |
| Anna178 2006-01-17 ch 1, | abusewow, that was really powerful, and very true, well, it is life you're writing about. I mean that you portrayed reality amazingly in this. ANNA |
| Jess 2006-01-17 ch 1, anon. | abusethats so sweet josh =( and sad at the same time =( saw wot u did with the bold letter "Grandma" that was really good!! so soz hun =( luv ya xoxo |
| Lun3tchi 2006-01-14 ch 1, | abuseI liked it. ~Luna~ |
| Hidden Lies 2006-01-13 ch 1, | abuseYup... my grandma was cremated too... yup.. yup! great work *hippie voice* I know man I know! Deep! (tehehe) |
| Ben Wuest 2006-01-13 ch 1, | abuseVery tough topic to write about, few writers will pull it off. But it was good and I liked it, though I'll admit it made me feel that feeling of happy and sad simultaneously. Liking it, B. |