This was definitely different. I liked it though. Almost sounds like it could be the chourus of a song. Great job!

Wow...intensely deep. Well done, I like your imagery a lot. :)

unique, nice imagery, but "bleeding heart" is a bit of a cliche. I like the mention of over the rainbow. When you are unhappy where you are or want something better, you wish for things over-the-rainbow, or something like that that means the same thing. But whatever. Great poem.

I enjoyed this, especially the first to lines...but everything...the images, excellent. Keep writing.

I like it