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| Reborn As I 2006-11-01 ch 1, | abusewell, you definately depicted your inner conflict well in this piece. |
| Manny Terwilliger 2006-01-13 ch 1, | abuseThis one is very nice. The short, choppy writing style makes it more powerful. Very well-written. |
| Faithless Juliet 2006-01-13 ch 1, | abuseI like the idea that our emotions fight the battles for us - like all we have to do is stand still and let our heads work it all out. I really like this, keep up the good work. Much love,Juliet. |