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Reborn As I 2006-11-01 ch 1,	abuseeverything is so relatable(is that a word?) in this one, but there are these two lines that just don't work for me. "have you ever had pain poured in you to the top?" and "have you ever been treated that low?" i think changing those two lines would make a world of difference in the poem. by the way, some of the questions you asked really hit home for me in a "remember when..." kinda way.
Princess-anna57 2006-01-23 ch 1,	abuseWow. Well written. bursts into tears damn, you've brought up so many points in my life. lol! Not a bad thing! ^_^ Thanks for the review, and yes, I have many more poems that I have already written which I will post sometime soon! ^_^ Also, thank you for adding me to your favourites list! gives you a jar of cookie! Write on! ^_^ ~Anna~
Manny Terwilliger 2006-01-13 ch 1,	abuseThis interrogation-style poem is, quite honestly, a stroke of genius. The two-line questions create a great rhythm, but I like how you changed that up at the end to a three-line sentence.