Lots of emotion. Very good job!

oh my god... the last line is so vindictive &dismissive and... excellence. i am in awe.

Aw 0.o This is awesome. It makes the reader feel real, raw emotion. You rock

~Shavo

my god. so much in this-I have no idea where to start. The ending line is just acidily painful, and the sadness through out, it's morbid in a fairytale way.

...wow....I like! lots.Um, I'm so bad at reviewing (as if you didn't already know) but... yeah, reminds me of something in myself, I... I dunno, it's just really good.~Aquila