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| XxSacrificialXDemisexX 2008-03-28 ch 7,  | abuseThese were all beautifull written and though it's clear that your insiraption came from the book "Speak", you truly made the character your own :) |
| Getuie 2007-02-09 ch 2, | abuseThis has such a very, very strong sense of presence... it's as if one can hear the silence. |
| myno 2006-12-23 ch 7, anon. | abuseAchingly lovely. |
| Gleechumber 2006-12-22 ch 7, anon. | abuseOh... wow. Just... wow. This is so powerful. Really, this is amazing, I love the last line so much! I've been away for a long time, but I'm back now, so I'm gonna start reviewing some of your stuff that I've missed out on! :) |
| nanashi-04 2006-12-21 ch 7, anon. | abuseInteresting |
| Ivriniel 2006-03-25 ch 6, | abuseI like these poems! ^^ I can see the connections between them and the book and I think you created it very well. PS: After some whiskey I just decided to start writing again ;) |
| bahaghari 2006-03-20 ch 6, | abuseContinue updating this girl. Love it, mucho, mucho. And, I can relate. |
| The Greymalkin 2006-03-06 ch 6, anon. | abuseThis is raw, powerful, and heartfelt. Keep up the great work! |
| deathbyeuphoria 2006-03-03 ch 6, | abuseOh, wow. This was beautiful in a more or less tragic way. Mhm. Nice job. |
| breezy nostrils 2006-03-03 ch 6, | abusei love the anger in this one. nice work! |
| breezy nostrils 2006-03-03 ch 5, | abusei like this metaphor too. nice work! |
| breezy nostrils 2006-03-03 ch 4, | abusei love this metaphor. it just says so much. |
| breezy nostrils 2006-03-03 ch 3, | abusethat's still creepy, but i love the blood imagery at the end. beautiful! |
| breezy nostrils 2006-03-03 ch 2, | abuseaw i can totally relate. love the way you interpreted silence. nice! |
| breezy nostrils 2006-03-03 ch 1, | abuseso beautiful and raw. nice work! |