Anti-heroes are always fun. Kyle, the 30th, feels like a nasty version of... Spike. Or Angel.

Well, whatever.

The theme is nice, the price of wishes are always heavy. Should they come true, well... be prepared, I guess.

But um, the Englishness of Ike is questionable. Maybe refine that part a little?

All in all, this is a good story. Can't wait to see Kyle again. One of the many.

So sad... And I have this urge to call the girl lotsa things.

Good story line. I know your stories don't always end up happily, and I kept thinking how you were gonna destroy a good happy ending for this story too. Ah, you're gifted when it comes to that.

The ending was a bit sad for Ethan. Not only did he lose his body and soul, his love was in love with someone else. T_T must you make stories this sad? Sigh.

All in all, still a good read. Awesome storyline and you still kept that melancholy style of writing. M good!

how depressing... it's so sad...

-YuLian