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les petits bateaux
2006-03-11
ch 1,
abuseStunning, as always. Your imagery and lines were always a delight to my eyes.
simpleplan13
2006-02-26
ch 1,
abuseI love that last line so sad and so incredibly true... I love the whole thing actaully the sand paper thing is great
mezzie
2006-01-22
ch 1,
abuseadoring this. properly jealous of your stellar phrase "second skin catastrophe". gah... there's so much in this.. amazing.

mezzie
backseats on thursdays
2006-01-19
ch 1,
abuseHonestly breathtaking. An amazing thought process.
addie pray
2006-01-18
ch 1,
abuseThis is fantastic. Fantastic and wonderful and beautiful and loads of other compliments as well. I didn't pay attention to all the letter art stuff, and for me that made it more gorgeous.
account not in use
2006-01-18
ch 1,
abusemix with sand(paper) and formulate layers-it's so sing-song defiant.
the naked civil servant
2006-01-15
ch 1,
abusewow the last line was amazing. i am in awe.
White Tea and Ginger
2006-01-14
ch 1,
abuseOh, god. Painful and beautiful at the same time. Great job.
beti213
2006-01-14
ch 1,
abusehehe I just read people's "half their size" issue and the last line made me think of that. this poem is almost physically painful to me... like someone's tearing through my skin. not pretty, and beautifully written nonetheless. I love the phrase "delicately floating bones." like a cloud. but not. like happiness. but not.great piece. keep writing.
X.xPrincess.Midnightx.X
2006-01-13
ch 1,
abuseI like the deep meaning you put in your poetry, it's just amazing! I always love your poetry, great work. Just here to remind you, keep writing!
myno
2006-01-13
ch 1,
abusewhat to say? Your poetry never fails to amaze me.
Aquafied
2006-01-13
ch 1,
abuseoh and thats just anotherone of me.

hah, i dont even know why i am laughing, but images are kind of close to everything today.
citrus scented
2006-01-13
ch 1,
abusehehe something to blame...something to claime. this is brilliant, its so simple but god it just holds so much. the writing is so soft and delicate, but the thoughts and deeper meaning behind it all is imense. wonderful.
poetic abortion
2006-01-13
ch 1,
abusethe.last.line.is.so.perfect.it.burns.

(heheh) your name is so pretty now and this is oh so pretty, too. love it. each time i read i giggle even when my heart breaks; yes, it is that angsty. (LOVE)

~* noelle
a lonely september
2006-01-13
ch 1,
abuseyou write beautifully & i like your name.
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