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| les petits bateaux 2006-03-11 ch 1,  | abuseStunning, as always. Your imagery and lines were always a delight to my eyes. |
| simpleplan13 2006-02-26 ch 1, | abuseI love that last line so sad and so incredibly true... I love the whole thing actaully the sand paper thing is great |
| mezzie 2006-01-22 ch 1, | abuseadoring this. properly jealous of your stellar phrase "second skin catastrophe". gah... there's so much in this.. amazing. mezzie |
| backseats on thursdays 2006-01-19 ch 1, | abuseHonestly breathtaking. An amazing thought process. |
| addie pray 2006-01-18 ch 1, | abuseThis is fantastic. Fantastic and wonderful and beautiful and loads of other compliments as well. I didn't pay attention to all the letter art stuff, and for me that made it more gorgeous. |
| account not in use 2006-01-18 ch 1, | abusemix with sand(paper) and formulate layers-it's so sing-song defiant. |
| the naked civil servant 2006-01-15 ch 1, | abusewow the last line was amazing. i am in awe. |
| White Tea and Ginger 2006-01-14 ch 1, | abuseOh, god. Painful and beautiful at the same time. Great job. |
| beti213 2006-01-14 ch 1, | abusehehe I just read people's "half their size" issue and the last line made me think of that. this poem is almost physically painful to me... like someone's tearing through my skin. not pretty, and beautifully written nonetheless. I love the phrase "delicately floating bones." like a cloud. but not. like happiness. but not.great piece. keep writing. |
| X.xPrincess.Midnightx.X 2006-01-13 ch 1, | abuseI like the deep meaning you put in your poetry, it's just amazing! I always love your poetry, great work. Just here to remind you, keep writing! |
| myno 2006-01-13 ch 1, | abusewhat to say? Your poetry never fails to amaze me. |
| Aquafied 2006-01-13 ch 1, | abuseoh and thats just anotherone of me. hah, i dont even know why i am laughing, but images are kind of close to everything today. |
| citrus scented 2006-01-13 ch 1, | abusehehe something to blame...something to claime. this is brilliant, its so simple but god it just holds so much. the writing is so soft and delicate, but the thoughts and deeper meaning behind it all is imense. wonderful. |
| poetic abortion 2006-01-13 ch 1, | abusethe.last.line.is.so.perfect.it.burns. (heheh) your name is so pretty now and this is oh so pretty, too. love it. each time i read i giggle even when my heart breaks; yes, it is that angsty. (LOVE) ~* noelle |
| a lonely september 2006-01-13 ch 1, | abuseyou write beautifully & i like your name. |