Beautiful. :) It almost reminds me of a haiku due to the style you wrote it in. Keep up the good work.

I like how it is morbid, creepy but still written very simply at the same time. Good work!

Mm, I like the simplicity of your style. It's sweet and simple, but resonating. Nice.

Kinda creepy. not too bad. Keep it up!

Wow, I didn't realize you added all those already. And I didn't see some of those today.

And thanks for making people "like" me, Raining Silver!:P

She wasn't lying when she said her friends thought it was disturbing.

And I still do.;-)

wow i liked it

would of liked to of seen more but good