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| Lacey 2006-02-23 ch 1, anon. | abuseHoly damn. That was amazing. And touching. And true. And hardhitting. And modern. |
| cling peach 2006-02-23 ch 1,  | abuseOh, wow, pretty! Really beautiful language, and a great flow. I love the ending. I also love "I found my last shred of Hope/life/smiles/laughter/joy/resistance A sense of reality" I just love all the slashes, works really well. And I also adore the line "(Prescription drugs and thoughtless hugs)" Just really struck a chord with me. Awesome work, keep it up!! |