oh wow.

spectacular.

Wonderful imagery. The ending was just heart-wrenching, great write.

What i like about your poetry is that each poem speaks volumes, each line cries out emotion, cries out the truth about quite drastic situations that many people never have to deal with. This poem touched me as i too know someone who is after just one more fix and one will never be enough. You described the imagery well i especially liked the part "lie still & watch the world pass you by in brilliant colours"Brilliant.

oh, another great poem. loved the addiction portrayed in this. wonderful job.

This was so powerful, I can't even begin to describe it. I can literally feel the desperation screaming from your words.

i greatly enjoyed the fourth stanza and 'Is. This. How. It. Feels. To. Be. Alive?' the periods really strengthened the meaning.

Love the parentheticals. Quite a tragic piece; I love it.