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| shola 2006-07-21 ch 1, | abuseThat's very sweet, and very very sincere. I'll be honest, it wa sthe title that drew me in to this one (it's a girl pleaser, you could use this title for some chick flick and make so much money). Tangent. Apologies.I really like this. But then I'm a huge fan of squishiness |
| L. X. Petrik 2006-02-21 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful! Wonderful! Marvolous! (if that's how you spell it) This is old at heart. I love the way you rhyme things. Your words chocies, everthing about this poem is big, wonderful and grand. More poems like this and I'll never be able to leave ficitonpress, not even for a second. |
| Aslan Israel 2006-01-14 ch 1, | abuseI love how the end rhymes but it all runs together like a story. You sound so honest when telling this; I can't help but love it. |