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| forever screaming 2008-07-01 ch 1,  | abuseabsolutely amazing! i really enjoyed reading it! good job |
| O.r.i.g.i.n.a.l.isn't.My.st... 2006-05-04 ch 1, | abuseWow, good poem.^^Throughout the poem, you did this "show and tell" element that lead us to know what the girl was doing and feeling- yea, if that made sense- And like there was obvious parts about the girl, but there were also inconspicous moments about the girl- that might have not made sense-...Anyway, good poem. I liked how there was this rhyming rythmn. Great job on portraying the message. Nice work, bravo^^ |