Defiantly relatable and melancholy. Nice work.

Keep writing.

-Seras

Will you hit me for saying that the poem's beautifully sad, leaving absolutely no criticism? I hope not...

It made me shiver. I love your words.

oh wow. This is beautifully written. Full of melancholy and emotion. Love, rhy.

I am no poet, and keep that in mind.

Oh, that is terribly sad. I feel awful for the narrator of the poem. What a terrible thing to go through.