I like how you used the bold and italics throughout the poem. It added character to it. :)

You know, this really helped me through a tough time. Thank you for it.

okay, this poem puts you on my favorites list. I love your style. It always catches my attention right away and draws me into the emotions of the person speaking. Fab job.

Congratulations. This is the first poem that has ever sent shock waves through me. I was trying to figure out what that unfinished word was, and BAM! It hit me like something else. Wow!

i think the title's okay. the poem is just brilliant. dude, you rock.

sorry, i have trouble coming up with titles. i can't help you there, but your poem was great!! it flowed very well and your style (with the italics and bold) was unique. keep writing!!

love from VB

Wonderful poem. Very well written. Haunting and beautiful. I'm not sure if I can help on the title.

How about "Shame in my Pocket"?

I dunno.

I like the "cocaine kiss" idea. Just because.

You're still writing, I see. And extremely well, at that. It flows well, and is very poignantly expressed.

I am still known to write on the odd occassion here and again, but haven't had the time nor state of mind for it, or at least the posting of it, for a while.

And I am plenty glad to hear from you again. Might spark me into some writing. ^_^

And, by the way, fantabulous is a great word.

Hmm, this was interesting, the format is done perfectly, what with the bolds and parenthesis. I dont have much more to say about it other than it was very interesting, very good, very well-written, and that I think the title suits it well.

omg this is amazing! it really is. the parenthesis, bold and italics are perfect, especially as you can read into them - like 'it was my fault' in these lines: 'it wasn’t ra—(no, don’t use thatword) it was my fault'and li(n)es. AMAZING work. *added to faves* um... title... sorry i cant think of one better than the one u've already got...