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| CiaoMonAmi 2008-03-12 ch 1,  | abuseI like how you used the bold and italics throughout the poem. It added character to it. :) |
| Wind's Whisper 2007-03-18 ch 1, | abuseYou know, this really helped me through a tough time. Thank you for it. |
| arohalove 2007-01-11 ch 1, | abuseokay, this poem puts you on my favorites list. I love your style. It always catches my attention right away and draws me into the emotions of the person speaking. Fab job. |
| FormerlyKnownAsKatoka 2006-05-02 ch 1, | abuseCongratulations. This is the first poem that has ever sent shock waves through me. I was trying to figure out what that unfinished word was, and BAM! It hit me like something else. Wow! |
| a lonely september 2006-03-03 ch 1, | abusei think the title's okay. the poem is just brilliant. dude, you rock. |
| violet bones 2006-03-02 ch 1, | abusesorry, i have trouble coming up with titles. i can't help you there, but your poem was great!! it flowed very well and your style (with the italics and bold) was unique. keep writing!! love from VB |
| DarknessConsumes 2006-01-30 ch 1, | abuseWonderful poem. Very well written. Haunting and beautiful. I'm not sure if I can help on the title. |
| ayadora 2006-01-28 ch 1, | abuseHow about "Shame in my Pocket"? I dunno. I like the "cocaine kiss" idea. Just because. |
| Cianna Greenwood 2006-01-17 ch 1, | abuseYou're still writing, I see. And extremely well, at that. It flows well, and is very poignantly expressed. I am still known to write on the odd occassion here and again, but haven't had the time nor state of mind for it, or at least the posting of it, for a while. And I am plenty glad to hear from you again. Might spark me into some writing. ^_^ And, by the way, fantabulous is a great word. |
| randompoetry 2006-01-14 ch 1, | abuseHmm, this was interesting, the format is done perfectly, what with the bolds and parenthesis. I dont have much more to say about it other than it was very interesting, very good, very well-written, and that I think the title suits it well. |
| just a teardrop 2006-01-14 ch 1, | abuseomg this is amazing! it really is. the parenthesis, bold and italics are perfect, especially as you can read into them - like 'it was my fault' in these lines: 'it wasn’t ra—(no, don’t use thatword) it was my fault'and li(n)es. AMAZING work. *added to faves* um... title... sorry i cant think of one better than the one u've already got... |