So sad. T_T I think poems that people can relate to are the strongest kind, no matter the poem itself. Awesome writing.

I love it, you have a great style of writing.

aw sad, but rings true. i like the flow of that, nice song!

it wasn't anything particularly thought provoking or bursting with imagery, but there's something about that poem that slips into the reader's mind and make them feel awfully sad.

keep writing

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Well, it fits perfectly. It's beautiful and haunting and captures the emotions after the passion in them dies down. And thanks for the review!

Smooches-CGUll_the_Wizpig

Oh wow, that is beautiful. The heart-ache is so well conveyed.

Wow, after I read this I just got a chill. This is so sad, and written just right. I loved it.

'Singing lullabies in the darkso you won't see my tears' this was beautiful. the title really suits it, since a child hears their mothers heartbeat the most... & it's comforting to them.