wow this is good! very well written! keep up the good work!SarahJane

Love it. I get what you're saying.

humerous and heartfelt in equal proportions... your words are worth more than such a meager sum.

The wording is pretty, by the way, have you read any of Victor Vestitor's works? I have a feeling you might like them.

true and moving. i like the emotion in this. keep on writing!

this is so realistic, & it's not fair either. nice job melting on the page.