wow this is really good, wish u could hear u play the song on ur the constrasting sentences, kgreat work

wow that's how i feel right now... i love this! u did so good expressing it all out and putting it into words... good job

are you supposed to be some punk rocker wannabe? -no offense

nice song my good friend, was a little short but io liked the rythem and theme of the song. keep it up!

I know how you feel, this is exactly what I am feeling right now. You explain it so well, where I was having trouble trying to put it into words. This is beautifully done.

keep it up.

wow, you actually took the words right out of my mouth. i know exactly, exactly what you mean. and i liked the structure and wording of this one in general... only suggestion is that you always say "I just," and it gets a bit redundant, but if you're using repetition for effect then it's just fine. more than fine, actually. i like it a lot.

nice song. i especially like the lines'Maybe I’m just lying again/ But it feels like I’m telling the truth'great work!