yummy. nd that means, this is good. lovely, lovely words. who needs drugs-words are so much more thrilling! this is a good one.

Congrats, very very good imagry in this one. Plus, it can be taken different ways pertaining to the reader, all in all very good.

This is some badass images in this poem. Very nicly put. Could mean all kinds of things and it attacks ones own demons no matter what demons they are. Good poem.

Dark. Very, very, very dark. The only critism I have is that you seemed to rely heavily on big words. Nevertheless, the effect is quite dramatic. Compared to the millions of poems out there on similar topics and by authors of varying skill, this one is quite decent.