well done, very amusing. Now, young Adam wouldn't have anything to do with the prologue? how about Eve? hm...? anyways, very good apart from the obvious clues you have there.

heehee, funniness...

Apart from the shot at the Catholic church (which could end up making you a LOT of enemies) this was pretty good. In fact, I think you should take out the last two paragraphs and resubmit this as "The Beginning"

very good, very funny

please keep going, i most definitely want to know what happens.

honorata

Oh...well, I just IM what I though. This is to make a number appear.