 we wont EVER look b a c k 2006-02-06 . chapter 1i'm not sure how the title relates to the poem but then again maybe it doesn't have to but other than that it was a good poem, megan it's me, raven talk to me or leave me a review but i need something to keep me connected to passaic... |
 lackluster 2006-01-15 . chapter 1i love how you convey your message. it seems really heartfelt and almost painfully true. and i adore the summary(and the title); it's what made me read this, to tell you the truth. |
 poetic abortion 2006-01-15 . chapter 1this is perfection to its core, i love it.
~* noelle |
 Liebchen Rose 2006-01-15 . chapter 1 A little confusing, but I liked it all the same. I like the stanza about sitting down with your pen to write. Nicely done.
~Hawke |
 Margot Tenenbaum 2006-01-15 . chapter 1ohthis is awesome.nice use of breaking up the stanzas. |
 primal injection 2006-01-15 . chapter 1This was very interesting. Love the feeling of the last few lines, really touching. Nice... |
 chaos called creation 2006-01-14 . chapter 1so heartfelt. the ending is striking, it made my eyes widen. |
 pirateface 2006-01-14 . chapter 1That's wonderful Rei-san!
Am I More Than You Bargained For Yet?
whee fall out boy. :)
that's a great poem! |