hm. Makes me think. I do wonder if there's a hidden meaning in all this lovely imagery and flowing lines. It's a nice poem, well written.

The arrangment of this poem really helps create the picture in my mind. The best part is the last stanza, "and weave/ the stars into your wrist/ until you recieve/ supernova's kiss." Excellent!

Monday

nice poem, i like the way you wrote drips. love that abstractness about it. keep on writing!

Wonderful imagery.

Great. This really runs and stops well. The beat-flow that you've created is enhanced by the overwhelming imagery that jumps out through this. I like the way the sound imitates the action in a way. Good write.