|Reviews for fire hazard|
| Draketeeth 3/28/06 . chapter 1
hm. Makes me think. I do wonder if there's a hidden meaning in all this lovely imagery and flowing lines. It's a nice poem, well written.
| Lost In Context 1/18/06 . chapter 1
The arrangment of this poem really helps create the picture in my mind. The best part is the last stanza, "and weave/ the stars into your wrist/ until you recieve/ supernova's kiss." Excellent!
| breezy nostrils 1/15/06 . chapter 1
nice poem, i like the way you wrote drips. love that abstractness about it. keep on writing!
| forsakensmile 1/14/06 . chapter 1
| Moondog Dozier 1/14/06 . chapter 1
Great. This really runs and stops well. The beat-flow that you've created is enhanced by the overwhelming imagery that jumps out through this. I like the way the sound imitates the action in a way. Good write.