WOW very disturbing, but also very well written, I love the flow between the two people in the poem, the repatition of the words from the last line to the first line of the next stanza and changing the font. Oh and your right if she could be there she would be, and in a way she always is, because I happen to know how much she cares about you. thank you for sharing this poem with us, it really is very good, and i'm sure it was hard to write and post.

Good collection of haiku's on the topic of (gollum, gollum) fighting with yourself. I've been there, kid.

Peace, Daze

An incisive exploration of a warring self. I liked the technique of each verse being the "other" voice--this was very effective; each voice is clearly delineated.

editorial note: in the 4th verse, i think you mean "hollow" instead of "hallow".

omg...*hugs* i AM there as much as i can be. i'm in your heart, and you're in mine... you will never be alone... and you will NEVER need to deal with HIM again...i love you!

love,sirius