Hmm... very interesting, and I wish there was more!

Let's see...

Well Braiden sounds like a stalker, rather obsessed with dear Evangeline - even if it wasn't him who trashed her room (though it appears that it was, in which case he should definitely stay away from her!).

I liked Daron at first, but no longer - he should be of stronger character and should have run from Eliana rather than let her get so close... that, and the fact that he still dreams of being with her when she's clearly a nasty piece of work.

Now Scott... hopefully, he's the right guy for Evangeline - unless you're going to put your readers through another heartbreak!

That first seen, in italics with Evangeline and her sister, I can so see my sister and I in the same place. Amazing intro.

The part about them being twins but opposites reminds me of my twin brother and I. I swear, all the math and science smarts went straight to him...nice work with the middle part, I love the flow.

I like the bold face too, I can see a little bit of myself in that. So...when are you going to publish?? This is looking great so far! Keep writing.

Enjoyed this. Nice job here.