So true...

your time is up. i love that line! hehe it reminds me of someone...anywho well done!Thorn

*laughs* I know that feeling! I thought the timing and phrasing were nice. But the poem is too short! One doesn't get much of a sense of it.

Toodle pip!

Keeper of the Bells

I can relate.

1. does not make sense.

2. boring

3. good try

4. put more excitment into your work.