 Moonlight Tigress 2006-01-15 . chapter 1i must admit, this was a great piece...
now, im not a mean person and i usually wouldnt comment on this, but the use of the word '**' kinda takes a bit out of the whole poem itself, to be honest.
then again, it can be seen as a bit of a wakeup call in this poem too...
oh its just too good this poem... bravo! continue amazing poet!
heh... sorry about that..
great great great...
i think ill shut up now before you come after me with some dangerous spikey item... bye! |