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Moonlight Tigress 2006-01-15 . chapter 1
i must admit, this was a great piece...

now, im not a mean person and i usually wouldnt comment on this, but the use of the word '**' kinda takes a bit out of the whole poem itself, to be honest.

then again, it can be seen as a bit of a wakeup call in this poem too...

oh its just too good this poem... bravo! continue amazing poet!

heh... sorry about that..

great great great...

i think ill shut up now before you come after me with some dangerous spikey item... bye!
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