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| Aubrey Solenge 2007-07-17 ch 1,  | abuseWow. Man oh, man. That is something. It's the voices inside the head, literally. Sorry for my ENORMOUS absence. I wish I could explain, but there is no time for it in a review. It's all about you here. I think I relate a little too closely to this poem, but I love it greatly. |
| Emmytastic gal 2006-05-17 ch 1, | abuseBRAVO! |
| Arutha 2006-04-10 ch 1, | abuseDamn, girl. I knew that, given time, you would be far better than me one day. Man, I'm just upset that I wasn't there to watch it happen. This truly transcends anything of yours I've ever read, and I am absolutely speechless. It's beautifully written, with eloquence and matter-of-factness and the meaning is absolutely true. You've captured the essence of poetry as I always knew you were leading up to; don't ever let it go ;P By the way, sorry I have nothing new for you; I got tired of always giving other ppl (not you) reviews and either getting nothing back or me sending like a paragraph review just to get "good job, review me again **," in return. So anyway, I'll try to write some more shtuff ;P |
| keltica 2006-01-27 ch 1, | abuse"Star-dust obsidian", very interesting. I just wish minerals and precious stones were more frequent in contemporary poetry. I'm sorry if I haven't reviewed at all but I've had a lot to do recently and only now I'm trying to catch up. You have a strong hold on imagery and the words you use stand out in the lines of your poems. Tschuskeltica |
| girl with rad i o 2006-01-15 ch 1, | abusewow. i'm impressed. :) lovely use of words, nice vocabulary, love the first couple stanzas, just... wonderful. |