Hey again,

Haven't been on here for a while, but decided to start reviewing (and all the other stuff) again!

You have a real grasp on imagery, which was very potent and extremely descriptive. It honestly felt like I was reliving your storm through your eyes! I particularly liked the lines:

"Gloom’s solace struggles with the screaming light"

and:

"Alive to haunt the world that came to pass"

Very very well done!

~ Ethreal Kisses ~