| Reviews for fresh from the blender |
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all you need is oxygen 9/13/08 . chapter 1i love it in general, but i think it was the format/italics/bolds that really did it for me. i love how nothing is capitalized. capitalization in poetry for the sake of grammar kind of ruins it for me. except i'm not one to talk, since i do that a lot. eh. i like: "..back to your/new/girlfriend/who i happen to know well..." i love everything after that. the emotion is amazing. vindictive and angry. |
Flies 3/3/06 . chapter 1Reminds me of villians in superhero comics-how they always try to get the last laugh. I love the title (I'm obsessed with blenders) and the way it's written, it's really fun, again, in a sadistic way. |
David-Mole 1/20/06 . chapter 1hahaha, I remember seeing this somewhere lol. Just read your others, and they're just as good. You're a very unique poet, incase I didn't tell you that before. Great stuff |
breezy nostrils 1/15/06 . chapter 1i love the anger in this, and the captivating title. nice work! |
insomnia in dreamland 1/15/06 . chapter 1i loved this, formatting at all. i like the way you wrote it with bold italicized and underlined letters. i love the line about a heart being dropped into a blender. it reminded me of a song i heard once. but anyway, back to the topic, i loved that line. i could just picture a heart being dropped into a blender and god... your poem was just so wonderful. |