Before I read the description at the end, I was so confused... "This lady is messed up!" But I like it! After I read the whole demon/human thing, I enjoyed it more when I reread it. I like the perspective. It's kind of gloomy... but when in the right mood, I like gloomy. :)
Keep writing!
~Daughter of Music

It reminds me of Vivian in the book Blood and Chocolate. She is a werewolf in love with a human, but he does not accept her once he sees her become a werewolf before his very eyes.

This seemed to flow like a sort of chant; I liked it muchly!