ah! this was excellent. amazing grave childlike tone, and the end was... god? xx

Ack! I do that sometimes! X3 But it's strange how everything innocent gets warped and twisted into something evil in the dark, no? I love it. Oh, good God, I'm rambling again. I'll just leave it at this: I like it.

Creative! This was just...very good, well written. Creative, thats what comes to mind the most.

it's nice to see someone hasn't lost their imagination. :)

Wonderfully written, it has a childish glow to it. The ending is priceless.

maybe it wasn't supposed to be, but this struck me as adorable. I absolutely love the style (not quite as dark as mine, but somehow similar), and the setting is very realistic.