Interesting...professional. You weave your words easily. Wonderful imagery.

Wow. I was really surprised to discover I didn't review this the first time I read it. Maybe I was busy?

Well, this is an absolutely gorgeous piece. I love all the lush detail and evocative personification. Thank you.

m just lovely. makes me want to go outside and dance...

Very poetic, I enjoyed this one a lot.

H'mm. Not sure about this one. The story's okay, it's just that I was figuring that because the first verse was rhymned so well and had that sense of rhythm to it the rest of it would be the same kind of thing . . . and then not much of the rest of it rhymed except for one or two words here and there. :-(

Not that poetry has to be rhymed (most of mine aren't), but I feel this poem would have been better that way. Sorry. I do like the first verse though.

Lovely this, I like the language you use.

EB