so i just read ur story and its been on my favs list for a while til i had time to put aside to give it its due. a couple of spelling errors and some parts that seems confusing becuase of it. overall i loved the plot. im actually working on a story similar that had me thinking more indepth to your story. but anyways i really enjoyed it.

I really liked your story. I liked all your characters.

Fantastic story! I liked everything about it, for example how the name of the chapter came up in the last sentence and gave it some sort of closure.

I like the story and even though I sometimes can get a bit uncomfortable I think it's a really good story. Like the end of this chapter, I got pretty shaky when I read this and a few tears escaped for Helena's pain. But I will continue to read and see how it will all end.

I absolutely love ur story first of all it was very well written second I loved the charachers anyway I saw ur profile u write alot! anyway good luck with ur other stories. I just wanted to tell you I really liked this one.

wow. amazing story. stroke of geniouses running all the way through it.
i want to genuinely thank you for writing something so inspiring. it was a brilliant read and...keep writing =)
you should try and get your stuff published.

grammer needs checking, but good overall

I *just* read the whole of Broken Love Story in a oner (no homework done tonight, but what's new) and just wanted to say I really liked it. There could be a little bit more character development but basically it's really good. Nice one, and much respect to you for finishing it!

Positively wonderful, exactly like you so eloquently stated: This is how it should be, things working out, taken day by day minute by minute. Big APPLAUSE!

omg *cries* its over! gr8 ending i cudnt have done it ne better myself! it fitted the characters and story perfectly so a HUGE well done! lol :D cant wait to read ur new story! (i will get round to it i promise!) lol :D

kat x

AWW..its done!! omg ..i cant believe it's done..lol..i absolutely loved it..you are an amazing writer and i can't wait to read other stories written by you..keep up the amazing work! byee!

o go you *whoop*

lol it was good..touching but correct. i liked it and will mioss all of the charecters specialy hell lol ]kk so update ur new one!

Rachel xx

Wow! i loved this story its so sweet yay Gavin got to go to jail who! *victory dance* this story is amazing i loved the last paragraph its a really strong and bold way to end the story well done, will go read ur other stories right now! well done - again! :)

Aw, what a sweet little ending this was ^_^! I feel so sad though, no more Helena and Colin, I loved them, lol. Anyway it was all great...everything...I loved it. If only the story could last forever and ever...

You did great with this!

-MorganTW-

AH! It's done! OMG! Doesn't it feel great tofinish a sory? I love it when I do that too!

You have to update the other story, cause I'm waiting for it! OK?

This was just a wonderful story. It was a strong plot with a great message. I really liked it, but you know that already.

For now,

~Tzotel