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| R-Vega-X 2006-01-16 ch 1,  | abuseGood, though on your sixth line you spelt piece "peice" R-Vega-X |
| just a teardrop 2006-01-16 ch 1, | abusei can relate to the feeling, nicely written. just so you know, you spelt piece wrong. anyway, great work! :D |