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| les petits bateaux 2006-01-18 ch 1,  | abuseWow...this was simply beautiful. Your imagery was fantastically stunning and the way you linked everything from emotions to descriptions was quite perfect indeed. My favourite was mostly between the second to the fourth paragraph. The others a fine. Very well done. |
| Theory Of The 4th Dimension 2006-01-16 ch 1, | abuseNice, beautiful imagery. And some pretty good metaphors. It's very inspirational, and I really adored the message. Keep writing! |