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| rubberduckylove 2006-01-24 ch 1,  | abuseTu esta(esta, verDAD?) la chica muy... muy... inteligenta. Si? Y... estoy una chica muy... muy... aburrido, verDAD? Y estamos muy divertida! Si, si!! Mi espanol es muy... muy... MORENA!! Lol. I don't know how to spell inteligenta... and I don't know how to say we have. Estamos... some form of tengo. Anyways, rock en, te amo! |
| HauntedMisery 2006-01-16 ch 1, | abuseThis is beautiful, excellent work! |
| liscarthan-rae 2006-01-16 ch 1, | abuseI think the worst part of a relationship is finding out your the one causing the pain. I found the same thing out the hard way. It killed me inside too. I always thought I was the empathic one, turned out I was too cold to realise I was the one hurting the other one. The way you wrote this made me feel the situation a bit too well. Although it's not a matter of being well written (even though it is well written), you did an amazing job of portraying the other side of pain. I wish you happiness. |