More optimistic than I am used to from your works. Still just ominous enough to force one's eyes to the ground, though.

Unfourtunately, I just ran down and fell apart. Wonderful, eh? There is always a tomorrow, but it's just going to be another today. And today sucked. Tomorrow won't be better. At least on my side of the world.

Later...

I enjoyed reading this. It wasn't at all angry or anything unpleasant, even though life usually leaves us with that.

A few lines struck me as extremely sensical and original wording...

This has the feel of a journal, but to an audience, like to a person you'd want to pass down your findings of life. Hm unique, not more to say.

I was thinking of you just today and needed to say hey. So HEY! LoL

[I haven‘t read anything from you in such a long time! Pleasant surprise to find a new piece.] I really like the idea of not falling/failing of continually going and never stopping. Like if you sit down and catch your breath for a minute everything that you had will be gone. The loss of everything that you have left. I think that’s a strong mindset and a lot of us live in that frame; this is really good. I’ve always been attracted to how your poems all brake the molds - not so much unusual - but always separate from the rest. Keep up the good work.

Much love,Juliet.