Great stuff! I like how you set up the format with the first and last sections about indecision, and wrote the second and third stanzas with juxtapositioning lines.

-Kelayne-

I really like the three lines to each part it is really different and makes the poem flow really well, the emotion that comes across are really powerful, Keep up the good work

Beahumut

This is probably one of the very few (very, very very few) rhyming poems (or slightly rhyming) that I've ever liked. I like the last lines very much.

i like this. simple but well written :D i especially like the ending!