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| Kelayne Torarn 2006-02-17 ch 1,   | Great stuff! I like how you set up the format with the first and last sections about indecision, and wrote the second and third stanzas with juxtapositioning lines. --Kelayne-- |
| Evul Buddha 2006-01-28 ch 1, | I really like the three lines to each part it is really different and makes the poem flow really well, the emotion that comes across are really powerful, Keep up the good work Beahumut |
| terrishka 2006-01-24 ch 1, | This is probably one of the very few (very, very very few) rhyming poems (or slightly rhyming) that I've ever liked. I like the last lines very much. |
| just a teardrop 2006-01-16 ch 1, | i like this. simple but well written :D i especially like the ending! |