Short and sweet. I love the clothing description as well as the outfit itself. I tend to like that style. Nice title, by the way.

P.S. I was told to tell you that I was sent by neopets username: dose_of_darwin

maybe think of another way to refer to Linda without actually saying 'Linda'? otherwise, i like it.

tis quirky! and i like dressing out of whack too! =)

I love it...

I really enjoy authors who can correctly capture dialouge.Great job!!

This whole thing was basically character description with a few bits of dialouge. You also said 'Linda' a rather lot.

Glad to see you updating though