Haha wow I like this one, it's not too feisty but it sure shows where you stand. I especially like the part "Jeering at something you know little of"...it says something about that in the bible, it's either in Hebrews or 2 Peter...I was reading it the other day haha. Very cool.
Be blessed in JC!
xRachx

Ps. I forgot to mention in my reply that I owe everything I am inspired to write to Jesus. His Holy Spirit is the one who really does the poetry! haha, but once again, thank you for your kind reviews! You rock!

I really like this, and I like the "bite" as you call it, because it perfectly fits the context. I love how you portray your friend's superiority to the flamer and I can only agree. The song format and the slightly colloquial tone "baby" etc also fit the topic well. Good job.

I agree, that the person on the inside is often stronger than the one without. apearances can be decieving. sorry, but im not very good at giving reviews. But you had good clarity in this one. I only have one question...why would god make a world where people would have to suffer? was it something beyond his control.

WOOHOO!! You go girl! lol. That was great. Set the record straight.

You're a very talented writer, and don't seem to have a problem expressing your deep feelings on topics you feel passionate about...awesome!

I like song. It is very well done. Sorry to hear about your friend being critized for her work, but I'm glad she just laughed it off and continued her duty of following Christ. We have been warned that people will come against us and say all sorts of evil against us, but we are also told to be encouraged because it will earn great rewards for us. And that's a happy thought. Great job with this song. Also I would love to read your friend's poem or story that the atheist didn't like.

That's a good way to address such a stupid flame, and not unchristian at all. Anyone familiar with the Bible knows that Jesus wasn't friendly to everyone. Just ask the money changers in the temple!

Jesus didn't try to please His enemies, but He always stood by the truth. And this is also what Christians should do. Great job done by your friend, by first laughing off the flamer, and then asking some good questions (if this is really what she did) and great song about it.

BTW, I don't think your A/N was necessary - except for the fact that the whole thing happened online, the context is rather evident IMO.

This was an excellent song. I'm glad that you're friend was able to laugh it off... that's not always easy when people run around calling you insane and stuff.

I think you did a wonderful job of portraying exactly what I felt when I read your author's note. Flames aren't cool man... and they're a waste of time.

~*~AbunaiChikara

All I can say, is ROCK ON!